Diari itu.

assalamualaikum.

hai. its hve been a while isnt it? so, miss me? ok. cut the cheesy part. lets start.

well hello writer. this is for you. (im using 'awak' oke dik apiz.selalu dalam belog guna aku kau sajo.)

firstly, tahniah. awak dah capai satu tahap dalam hidup awak. yeah. bukan senang semua orang nak buat buku sendiri kan. so kita mula. tapi sebelum tu, ni based on my reading je tau. so, awak jangan take it too much. okey dik? work harder next time.

cerita. yes. good. tapi, (haruslah ada tapi) lagi best kalau lebihkan lagi part klimaks. u noe what i mean kan? part wheres the drama begins. the hardships of the wataks. their problems and so on. cut the cheesy parts a bit. honestly the cerita is quite good. waiting for 2nd book maybe. =)

ouh. best sebab i know semua latar.  thats the reasons ada pernah tanya dulu tu cerita sendiri atau camne. i mean ur story. ur kisah benar. tapi i dunno. kang nak tanya cerita tu betul ke tak kat watak Qucai macam tak proper plak kan. miahaha. ok sheesh.

the most cheesy part is the part where u used the dialog. homai homai. itu takleh terima. in real life atau dalam buku sekali pun. papa mama. sorry bout that. after all, mungkin ramai yg suka. but im not one of them. ihiks. tapi, oke. =)

last, cerita tu longgar sikit. orang boleh jangka lepas ni apa, lepas tu apa. yeah. ada dah orang cakap macam tu kan? tak ingat ter tengok kat mana. but yeah. longgar. but hey, dun worry awak boleh work harder for the 2nd book! well, go for the second, third, fourth and the numbers go on books okey!

eh capitalM tu memang lawa. tetttt.

ps ; i read novels. many novels. experinced writers. so i cant compared. itu tidak adil. sebab penulis Diari ni just a beginner. so, do support him! someday, he will be the most thumbs up writer. who knows kan. kun fayakun.